随着工业的发展，空气污染愈来愈严重。在一些城市越来越多的人因为空气的污染而备受疾病的煎熬。现请你根据图表所示，就你所在城市空气污染的状况写一篇短文，并对市政府提出至少两条改进建议。
本篇书面表达题目中只有柱形图，在描述图表所反映的内容时，要注意柱形图的柱形的高度，并由此判断空气污染所产生的原因。整个表达需要包括下列内容：话题讨论的背景，图表中四个数据所反映的情况及其产生的原因，并向市政府提出改进的建议。
通过审题抓住主要数据反映的主要问题即所要表达的要点：
话题讨论的背景：
1.随着工业的发展，空气污染愈来愈严重；
2.在一些城市越来越多的人因为空气的污染而备受疾病的煎熬；
3.以我们城市为例。
图表
1.空气污染50%的原因由车辆引起（路上行驶车辆越来越多，排放有害气体）；
2.空气污染35%的原因由工厂引起（排放废水）；
3.空气污染35%的原因由抽烟引起（对他人身体和环境有害）；
4.空气污染10%的原因由其它因素引起。
向市政府提出改进的建议。
Para 1话题讨论的背景；
Para 2概述图表所反映的信息，即把现象产生的原因清楚地叙述出来。
Para 3向市政府提出改进的建议。
变点为句
注意多重表达
1.随着工业的发展，空气污染愈来愈严重；
①With the development of industry, air pollution is getting more and more serious.
②As industry is developing, air pollution is getting more and more serious.
2.在一些城市越来越多的人因为空气的污染而备受疾病的煎熬。
①In some cities, more and more people are suffering from different kinds of illness because of air pollution.
②In some cities, more and more people have got miserable diseases because of air pollution.
3.以我们城市为例。
Take our city for example.
图表
1.空气污染50%的原因由车辆引起（路上行驶车辆越来越多，排放有害气体）。；
①About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. There are more and more cars and buses on the road, which give off poisonous gases.
②About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. More and more cars and buses are driving on the road, which give off poisonous gases.
2.空气污染35%的原因由工厂引起（排放废水）。
①35% of air pollution is caused by factories, which often pour waste water into the river.
②35% of air pollution is caused by factories, which often discharge waste water into the river.
3.空气污染35%的原因由抽烟引起（对他人身体和环境有害）。
①Another factor is smoking. Smoking does harm to others’ health as well as to environment.
②Another factor is smoking. Smoking does harm not only to others’ health but also to environment.
4.空气污染10%的原因由其它因素引起。
①About 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons.
②Other factors, taking up about 10%, cause air pollution.
向市政府提出改进的建议：围绕造成空气污染的其中两条原因进行联想。如：应该采取措施与空气污染作斗争。努力改善公共交通以满足公众的需求。禁止人们在公共场所抽烟；
We suggest that the city government should take some measures to fight against pollution. For example, first of all, the government should make a great effort to improve the public transport system to meet citizen’s demands. In addition, smoking must be forbidden in public. Only in this way can we solve the problem as soon as possible.
连句成篇
连句成篇的关键是将图表要点的叙述进行合并以及加上过渡句。
As is shown in the chart, air pollution in our city is caused by the following reasons. About half of the problem is caused by vehicles with more and more cars and buses on the road, which give off poisonous gases.35% of air pollution is caused by factories, which often pour waste water into the river. Another factor is smoking and it does harm to others’ health as well as to environment. About 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons.
参考范文(1)
With the development of industry, air pollution is getting more and more serious. In some cities, more and more people are suffering from different kinds of illness because of air pollution. Take our city for example.
As is shown in the chart, air pollution in our city is caused by the following reasons. About half of the problem is caused by vehicles with more and more cars and buses on the road, which give off poisonous gases.35% of air pollution is caused by factories. Another factor is smoking and it does harm to others’ health as well as to environment. Besides, about 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons.
We suggest that the city government should take some measures to fight against pollution. For example, first
of all, the government should make a great effort to improve the public transport system to meet citizen’s demands. In addition, smoking must be forbidden in public. Only in this way can we solve the problem as soon as possible.
参考范文(2)
As industry is developing, air pollution is getting more and more serious. In some cities, more and more people have got miserable diseases because of air pollution. Take our city for example.
As is shown in the chart, air pollution in our city is caused by the following reasons. About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. More and more cars and buses are driving on the road, which give off poisonous gases. 35% of air pollution is caused by factories, which often discharge waste water into the river. Another factor is smoking and it does harm not only to others’ health but also to environment. The rest of air pollution is caused by other reasons.
We suggest that the city government should take some measures to fight against pollution. New fuel can be used to take the place of gas. We can plant more trees, grass and flowers. All in all, if everybody realizes the importance of environment and does something to stop pollution, the problem will be solved.
（重庆市重庆一中2010届高三上学期期中考试）（经过笔者改编）
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