幻灯片 1 写作突破一 书信 分析指导 书信是人们在日常生活、学习、工作和公务活动中应用最为广泛的,有一定惯用格式的应用文。 英语书信的写作主要包括四个方面的内容,即:称呼,正文,结束语,署名。 ---- 幻灯片 2 第一步:称呼 称呼是指信文开头的称呼,其后一般用逗号。例如:对父母、亲戚:My Dear Mother/Dear Cousin等。对同学、朋友:My Dear Friend/Dear Mr. Jackson/Dear Sir等。对未婚女子:Dear Miss Lucy/My Dear Miss Lucy等。对一般女子:不论是否已婚:Madame/Dear Madame等。对已婚女子:Dear Mrs. Jackson/My Dear Mrs. Jackson等。对公司、学校、工厂等:Dear Sirs/Gentlemen等。 ---- 幻灯片 3第二步:正文 正文是信件的主体部分,也就是信的内容。正文应在称呼的下一行开始。正文的写法也有一定的规律,一般是:开头带有寒暄、客气的套语。正文要写事情。收尾有寒暄、客气的套语。一般的开头套语要根据信件内容,尤其是回信时的情景来选择不同的套语。而且要开门见山,提出写信的目的,表明信的性质。要发挥自己的想象力把题目中所给的三个要点进行扩展,同时要注意根据文章的要求增加相关的细节及关联词语,这样既能做到要点全面,又能使所写的文章语言流畅,衔接自然。 ---- 幻灯片 4 第三步:礼貌性的结尾套语 这些客套话一般都是焦急等待着您的回信的话。例如:I am looking forward to your reply./Please write to me soon./I hope to hear from you soon./I would appreciate it if you could send a reply at your earliest convenience.或者是问候、祝福一类的用语,例如:Please give my best regards to your family./Please remember me to your family./With best wishes to you. ---- 幻灯片 5 第四步:签名 签名时注意不要签自己的真名,按照书信的要求办事。个人署名:Yours truly W.J. Watson, 公司署名:Yours faithfully, Legend Computer Company Wang Lin Sales Manager。 ---- 幻灯片 6典题示例 (2010·全国Ⅱ) 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括: 1.教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2.授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础) 3.工作量: ——每周12学时,任选三门课 ——担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor) ---- 幻灯片 7 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好,请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。 ---- 幻灯片 8Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best, Li Hua ---- 幻灯片 9 [写作点拨] 本文要求以书信的形式把招聘信息表述给笔友,体现了命题的交际性原则。命题看似容易,动笔却不简单,写好更难。考生需根据提示的信息,连贯、贴切地把所要陈述的内容表达出来。本题所提出的要求符合考生的实际英语水平,各种层次的考生只要认真审题均能够发挥自己的水平。 ---- 幻灯片 10 [写作要点] 1.教授课程(the teaching courses) 2.授课对象(the listeners) 三年以上英语基础的高中生(the senior students who have at least three years of English learning experiences) 3.工作量(the work capacity) 一周12学时(teach 12 hours a week) ---- 幻灯片 11[范文借鉴] Dear_Peter, I_remember_you_told_me_you_were_interested_in_teaching_in_China. Our school now is looking for a native­speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students' English club or our school's English newspaper. ---- 幻灯片 12 Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I'd be more than happy to help. Best, Li_hua ---- 幻灯片 13[露一小手] (2010·福建省泉州市质检) 假设你叫李华,现是泉州某中学的一名高三学生。你的美国笔友Jack来信谈及汉语学习的困难并请你提出一些汉语学习的建议。请你根据以下提示,给Jack写一封回信。 提示: 1.学习汉语一定要有兴趣,不怕困难; 2.不要怕犯错误,多听,多读,多练; 3.创造和利用学习汉语的机会,如:结交中国朋友等; 4.其他建议…… ---- 幻灯片 14注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 2.信的开头已经写好,但不计入总词数; 3.词数120左右。 Dear Jack, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck to you! Li Hua ---- 幻灯片 15[范文借鉴] Dear_Jack, I'm_glad_to_receive_your_letter_asking_for_my_advice_on_how_to_learn_Chinese_well. Firstly, develop your interest in learning Chinese if you want to be good at it. Difficult as Chinese may seem, you are sure to make progress if you put your heart into learning it. Secondly, it is natural to make mistakes when learning a new language, so don't worry about mistakes. More listening and reading will be of great help in learning Chinese. ---- 幻灯片 16 Only practice can make perfect. Thirdly, you should try to get yourself into a Chinese environment and seize every opportunity to learn and practice your Chinese. For example, try to make friends with Chinese and communicate with them in Chinese, or you may attend Chinese training classes in your place. I am sure your Chinese will improve soon. Good_luck_to_you! Li_Hua ----

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