山东德州2013届高考英语短文改错+书面表达精练精析10
Ⅰ. 短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
One day, there is a blind man sitting with a sign by his feet, 1. _______
that read, “I am blind, please help. ” A creative publicist was 2. _______
walking by him and observed that the man only had a few of 3. _______
coins in his hat. He put a few of his own coin in it. 4. _______
Without ask for permission, he took the sign, turned it around, 5. _______
and wrote a new message. He then placed it back and left.
Later that afternoon publicist returned and noticed that the 6. _______
hat was almost complete full of coins. The blind man recognized 7. _______
his footsteps and asked if it was he that had changed the sign. 8. _______
He wanted to know which the publicist wrote on the sign. The 9. _______
publicist replied, “I just changed your message because people 10. _______
could understand it. ”He said goodbye and went on his way. The blind man didn’t know the new sign was “Today is spring but I cannot see it”.
Ⅱ. 书面表达
随着因特网的发展和计算机的普及，网上购物越来越普遍。假如某英文报社将对“网上购物的利弊”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示，以“Shopping on the Internet”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。内容要点应包括：
利
1. 方便，只需点击鼠标，就可买到所需商品
2. 节省时间、精力，尤其对老人、病人和工作繁忙的人
3. 价格更便宜
弊
1. 不能亲眼看见实物，出现购需不符的现象
2. 出现非法网上商店，收款不发货
建议
1. 谨防购物陷阱
2. ……(自己发挥)
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 参考词汇：非法的illegal; 谨防beware of; 陷阱trap
Shopping on the Internet
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet is becoming more and more popular. People can buy almost everything they need on the Internet.
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答案解析
Ⅰ. 1. 【解析】is→was 由时间状语One day知，句子要用一般过去时。
2. 【解析】that→which which引导非限制性定语从句，而that不能。
3. 【解析】去掉of a few“很少”，为形容词性短语，用于修饰可数名词；a few coins“几枚硬币”。
4. 【解析】coin→coins coin是可数名词，前面有a few，后面要加可数名词的复数形式。
5. 【解析】ask→asking without是介词，其后加动词-ing形式。
6. 【解析】在publicist前加the 这里是特指那位publicist，需加the。
7. 【解析】complete→completely 副词completely修饰形容词短语full of。
8. 【解析】√
9. 【解析】which→what 代词what作wrote的宾语，what he wrote“他所写的”。
10. 【解析】because→so 句子结构前面是结果，后面是原因，故用so。
Ⅱ.【参考范文】
Shopping on the Internet
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet is becoming more and more popular. People can buy almost everything they need on the Internet.
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages. The most important advantage is its convenience. All people need to do is to click the mouse. The products will be delivered to them on time. Furthermore, it can save energy and time, especially for the old, the sick and the busy people.
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. Firstly, customers can’t see the goods personally. Sometimes, the goods they receive may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. Secondly, some shops are illegal. They will never deliver anything after they get the money from you.
You should beware of being caught in a trap. Don’t pay before you make sure.
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