山东德州2013届高考英语短文改错+书面表达精练精析2
Ⅰ. 短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
In 1972, the United Nations hold a meeting in Sweden 1. _______
to share ideas about ways to take better care of for the 2. _______
earth. At the summit, people from more than one hundreds 3. _______
countries discussed some of the important problems faced 4. _______
our planet. Since then, several Earth Summits had been held. 5. _______
In 2002, the Earth Summit was held in Johannesburg. 6. _______
One of the main theme was “sustainable development”, or 7. _______
the question what we can continue developing the world 8. _______
without damage the environment. Most of the speakers 9. _______
talked the three biggest killers in the world. 10. _______
Ⅱ. 书面表达
［2012潍坊模拟］
假设你叫李华，是校报通讯员。上周三你班召开了一次班会，会上重点讨论“老人摔倒要不要扶起”这一话题，原因是近几年发生过多场因扶起摔倒老人而引火烧身的官司。你班同学对此进行了激烈的辩论，请你结合辩论情况，用英语为校报写一篇报道，并发表自己的看法。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
A class meeting was held in our class last Wednesday. At the meeting we classmates had a heated debate on “whether we should help the old people up when they fall over. ”
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答案解析
Ⅰ.1. 【解析】hold→held 句中有时间状语In 1972，所以要用一般过去时。
2. 【解析】去掉for take care of“照顾，照料”，为及物动词短语，其后直接加宾语。
3. 【解析】hundreds→hundred hundred与具体数字连用不加s。
4. 【解析】faced→facing face“面临，面对”和problems之间构成主动关系，故用现在分词。
5. 【解析】had →have 由句中的时间状语Since then可知，此句要用现在完成时。
6. √
7. 【解析】theme→themes theme为可数名词，one of后要加可数名词的复数形式。
8. 【解析】what→how “我们如何在不破坏环境的情况下持续发展世界”，故用how表方式。
9. 【解析】damage→damaging without是介词，其后加动词-ing形式。
10. 【解析】talked后加about talk about“谈论……”。
Ⅱ.【参考范文】
A class meeting was held in our class last Wednesday. At the meeting we classmates had a heated debate on “whether we should help the old people up when they fall over. ”
Some classmates think we have responsibility to help them, because we Chinese have fine traditions to help people in trouble. However, others have quite different opinions. They think we should keep a distance from them and help to call 120, because in recent years many lawsuits have happened due to helping old people. The helpers had to pay the injured a lot of money.
In my opinion, when we help the old people, we should depend on specific situation. When the old person is in great danger and badly needs help, we should give an immediate first aid and help to send him or her to the nearest hospital. When the old person is slightly injured, we’d better help to call the police.
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