山东德州2013届高考英语短文改错+书面表达精练精析4
Ⅰ. 短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Most of world’s diamonds come from Africa, but there 1. _______
is one place in Arkansas, America that they are found. 2. _______
They were first found there in 1906. About 50 thousands 3. _______
diamonds that have come from this field. A 40-carat diamond 4. _______
was the large ever found in North America. But most of the 5. _______
stones were too small to be mined. Soon all mining stop there. 6. _______
A few diamonds have been found in the sand and broken stone 7. _______
along the Great Lake, either. This is not where they first formed. 8. _______
They may have been formed far to the north and were carried 9. _______
south by the last great glaciers. 10. _______
Ⅱ. 书面表达
［2012长沙模拟］
假设你是图片上拿着酒瓶的MR DRUNK。图片描述的是你昨天经历的一件事。请写一篇100词左右的日记记录这件事的过程，并写出自己对此事的认识。
注意：1. 可适当发挥想像，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息；
3. 日记开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：醉驾drunk driving
Sunday Oct. 2nd，2011 Sunny
Yesterday I joined a classmate party. I was very happy to see my old friends, who I hadn’t met for years. And I drank a lot.
So I appeal to everybody never to drive after drinking! Cherish your life!
Ⅰ.1. 【解析】world’s前加the the world“全球”，为特指。
2. 【解析】that→where 关系副词where引导定语从句，表地点，在从句中作状语。
3. 【解析】thousands→thousand thousand和具体数字连用时不用复数。
4. 【解析】去掉that . . . diamonds是句子主语，have是谓语动词，that多余。
5. 【解析】large→largest “是在北美发现的最大的”，要用最高级。
6. 【解析】stop→stopped 和上下文时态相符应用一般过去时。
7. 【解析】stone→stones stone是可数名词，此处表复数意义故用复数。
8. 【解析】either→too 肯定句中用too，否定句中用either。
9. 【解析】去掉were and连接并列结构，此处carried前省略了may have been。
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Ⅱ. 【参考范文】
Sunday Oct. 2nd, 2011 Sunny
Yesterday I joined a classmate party. I was very happy to see my old friends, who I hadn’t met for years. And I drank a lot.
After the party, I drove home though my classmates had tried to persuade me not to, because I always believe that as a skilled driver, drinking a little does no harm to driving. As the night got darker, the wine began to take effect. All of a sudden, I cracked my car against a sign on the road.
Unluckily, a policeman was around and came towards me. He fined me and said “I hope that you will learn that drunk driving is a terrible thing. You may end up hurting yourself, and other innocent people. ”
I realized that the effects of drunk driving can be serious and long-lasting for all those involved.
So I appeal to everybody never to drive after drinking! Cherish your life!
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