日照市2014高考英语短文改错一轮训练(2)及答案  一、短文改错的解题基本思路 1.通读全文,掌握大意 首先,要认真阅读短文,把握全篇主旨,弄清上下文的逻辑关系,了解文章所创设的语言环境,为正确判断创造条件。 2.整句理解,逐行找错。 在读懂文章之后,要逐句逐行地找错。分析每个句子中句法、语法、行文逻辑等方面是否有错,要做到逐行分析,不可遗漏,句与句之间要注意连词的用法。 3.由易到难,各个击破 改错要从最简单、最熟悉的项目入手,先从语法的角度入手,再从逻辑方面考虑,最后推敲难题。 4.检查核对,规范改正 最后浏览改后的全文,看全篇是否语义通顺,注意正确行。 要特别注意规范改正错误, 严格按照示范规定符号和要求去改。切忌文字说明或用箭头表示。 二.短文改错的设题方式 一.错词: 错词的情况归纳起来大致可分为虚词选择错误、实词词形错误、同(近)义词、形似词选择错误等。 1.虚词错误 ①介词错误。介词错误主要集中在介词的固定搭配、介词多词义的用法以及一些意义相近介词、副词和连词的混用等。 1.After five years away in my hometown,I find that the neighborhood which I used to live in has changed a lot.(09全国卷I) 析:“从……离开,远离”应为短语 away from,不能与in搭配。应将in改为from。 ② 连词错误主要表现: 句与句之间的关系混淆,是并列、转折、承接、还是表原因;连词与介词、副词的混用,一些连词具有多重功能和词性以及意义相近连词的区别等。 1.I meant to give it back to you before four in the afternoon,and I was held up on my way back(09全国卷II) 析:分析前后两个句子可知,前面的句子与后面的句子存在转折关系,不是并列关系,应将 and 改为but。 ③冠词错误:冠词的考查集中在:应该使用定冠词的地方使用了不定冠词;应该使用不定冠词的地方却使用了定冠词;不定冠词a与an的误用等。 1.Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat with them. (2009.四川卷) 析:初次提到的人或物前应该用不定冠词,因此要将第一个the改为an。 2.实词错误 ① 名词错误主要集中在:名词的单复数形 式,特别注意不规则名词的复数形式;可数名词和不可数名词的混用;抽象名词具体化;名词的所有格等。 1. I stayed there for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. (09全国卷II) 析:one and a half 后接可数名词的复数形式,不能用单数。要将hour改为hours。 ② 动词错误主要有:不规则动词的过去式、过去分词形式错误;时态的不一致性;语态的错用;非谓语动词用法的选择,特别是非谓语动词作状语、表语、定语或宾语补足语时是用过去分词还是现在分词;在 to 后是用不定式还是动名词;以及在并列结构中后面动词的形式;谓语动词时态形式的错用;情态动词和 will(would), shall (should) 等助动词后面的动词形式的误用等。 1.There exist now a park that has a small river running through. (09全国卷I) 析:句子中的there exist相当于there be形式,exist的形式跟后面的名词a park保持一致,因此exist要用单三形式exists。 ③ 形容词与副词错误主要表现在:这两类词的混用;形容词或副词的原级、比较级、最高级的混用等。 1.The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school are gone. (09全国卷I) 析:分析句子,句子中没有比较对象,不能用比较级,要将older改为原形old。 ④ 引导词错误:在复合句中引导从句的连接词的错误运用,特别是在定语从句中关系词的错误运用,宾语从句中连接词的误用等。 1.One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father for the money. (09辽宁卷) 析:非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that,应将that改为which。 ⑤代词错误。代词考查主要集中在句子中代词的一致性、人称代词、反身代词、指示代词的混用等。 1.When I was in high school, most of my friends had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. (2009.辽宁卷) 析:根据句义后面句子中的it与前面句子中的bicycles是一类物,表示泛指。因此要将it改为one。 ⑥思维定势干扰错误。由于受汉语思维定势影响,造成一些英语词语的搭配错误。 1.I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. (09海南、宁夏卷) 析: anything意思是“任何事或任何物”,而everything表示“所有的东西或物”,很显然句子强调在宿舍的所有事情,应将anything改为everything。 ⑦行文逻辑错误。 高考短文改错中,涉及短文主旨大意及逻辑关系的错误这类试题的隐蔽性较强,单独看并没有错,但若放在整篇中则与全篇的意思不符。 I stayed here for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl was all right. 析:直接分析该句,没有任何错误,但结合上下文可看出句子是在转述过去发生的事情,不能用here,因此应将here改为there。 二、漏词 漏词考查主要集中在:名词前漏冠词;不及物动词后漏掉相应的介词。不定式前少了不该省的to;分句与分句之间往往漏掉相应的连词;句子中助动词、情态动词的遗漏。复合句中关系词、连接词的遗漏;以及句子中替代词的遗漏等。 1.One day, the school held party, where?I was invited to talk about Tianjin. (08天津卷) 析:初次提到的可数名词单数前面要加不定冠词,因此要在party前加不定冠词a。 2.It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expecting anything(09浙江卷) 析:在it is/was possible to do sth结构中,动词不定式符合不能省略,因此要在give前加to。 三、多词 多词考查主要集中在介词、副词、连接词、冠词、不定式符号to、代词、助动词等。这些词大都为虚词,在句子中的作用显得不大,但极易引起误用,是学生语言运用中最常犯的错误。 1.The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket.(09全国卷I) 析:句子的意思为 “市场把位置让给了一个超市”。这里并不表示被动意义,要将been去掉。 2. I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your bike on time yesterday.(09全国卷II) 析:return to的意思为返回到某地,而在句子中的意思为归还某物,不能加to,要将to去掉。 passage 13 Mary was an university student. She didn’t have much 1 ____ money and her parents were not rich, and she had an uncle 2. ____ who had been fortunately enough to collect great wealth. 3. ____ He always give her valuable Christmas and birthday presents. 4. ____ When her uncle’s birthday came round, Mary wanted buy him 5. ____ something really special, but because she was rich, she did not 6. ____ know how to get him. She went into the best shop in her 7. ____ town and explained what her problem was to one of helpful 8. ____ shop assistants. Finally she asked, “What do you have for 9. ____ someone who has already got everything he wants or needs. 10 The assistant sighed deeply and answered, “Envy, only envy.” 【参考答案】Key 13 an—a 2 and—but 3 fortunately—fortunate 4 give—gave 5to buy 6.she—he 7how-what8the helpful. 9 assistant -- assistants 10 right *******************************************************结束 *********************************************************结束 Pasasage14 As the world enters the 21st century, the development in the 1 _____ science and technology will bring us much more new hopes and 2_____ chance we`ve never imagined before.People are hoping have 3_____ a peacefully and highly developed world.To catch up with 4_____ the new development and to be success in the new century the 5____ younger generation is required to have different kind of skills 6____ and abilities, such like the computer science and the English 7____ language.Otherwise one will be left behind.Young people should 8____ study even hard at school and prepare themselves mentally 9____ and physically to meet with the challenge of the new century 10____ 【参考答案】Key 14 1.in the science –in science 2.much—many 3.hoping to 4.peacefully-peacful 5.success—successful 6.kind—kinds 7.like—as 8 right 9 hard—harder 10去掉 with *******************************************************结束 **********************************************************结束 (2011·四川卷)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分) 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个沟(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正; 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意:原行没有错的不要改 Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66. Morning and was always late with work.. His boss wanted to 67. fire him if he didn’t start coming on time,but he went to 68. the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69. medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70. The man did is told and slept.leally will,wake up before 71. the alam had even gone off.He had time for a properly 72. breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.”Boss,”he 73. said ,”that medicine really works!””I’m pleasing to hear 74. it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?” 【答案】 66、改troubles为trouble 67、改with 为for 68、改but 为so 69、去a 70、改them 为it 71、改wake为waking 72、改properly为proper 73、reach前加to 74、改pleasing为pleased 75、√ **********************************************************结束 【西南师大附中】 第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分) 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:每行只有一个错误,请按下列情况改正: 该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意:请在答题卡上作答。 I have been planning to join in our college basketball team 76. ________________ next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can 77. ________________ with other people who likes to play. They are teaching 78. ________________ me the most important rules and technique of the game, 79. ________________ and I was getting better all the time. We have a 80. ________________ neighborhood team where plays against other teams in the area. 81. ________________ One of my neighbors is helping rest of us 82. ________________ improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against 83. ________________ one of the best teams in the city, I think we can 84. ________________ beat them if we won't make any mistakes. 85. ________________  ********************************************************结束

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