2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（28）及参考范文：]英语写作引导句型（9） 23 Any visitor to this city country ... would almost inevitably deduce / draw his conclusion be surprised / struck / impressed by the fact.... *************************************************结束
9, 第三部分 写作(共两节，满分50分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题l．5分，满分l5分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(∨)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear David,
I can't be more glad and exciting to hear that you are 66. ______
paying visit to us. You are welcome to stay with us. We 67._______
will show you around the city but spend a lot of time 68. _______
talking and sharing. Now take your time make your 69. _______
plans. I will be teach and grading exams until July 70. ________
13th. Then, maybe I will fly to Mexico for 3 and 4 weeks. 71. ________
We have been decided that Damaris is not going to study 72. ________
in Canada and I might go to Mexico to solve some 73. ________
problems．Anyway，we hope what it will work out well． 74．________
We are looking forward to meet you soon． 75．________
Yours，
Victoria
第二节 书面表达（满分35 分）
自去年年底起，我国西南地区的旱灾持续了几个月。许多土地因干旱而颗粒无收，人们面对着缺水断粮的困境。在天灾面前，我们人类在寻找办法降低损失的同时，也应反省自己。请根据下表，写一篇文章分析出现旱灾的原因以及我们该如何从自身做起。
注意:(1)词数100左右; (2)可适当增加细节以使上下文连贯; (3)开头已写好,不计入总词数。
原因
做法
中国63％的城市面临水资源缺乏，污染和工业化恶化了这种情况；
大量树木被砍伐，森林覆盖率急剧下降；
水利工程没有合理利用，灌溉系统过于陈旧。
(1) 用水意识……
(2)水土保持……
(3)政府投入……
参考词汇1.drought干旱 2. industrialization工业化 3.water conservation project水利工程
4.irrigation systems 灌溉系统 5. investment投资
What Lessons Should Be Learned From the Drought
The drought in the south-west China lasts for several months, which makes people face water and food scarcity. We should learn lessons from it.
The drought can be caused by several factors.
短文改错
66．将exciting改为excited。 67．在paying后加a。 68．将but改为and。 69．在time后加to。 70．将teach改为teaching。71．将and改为or或to。 72．去掉been。
73．正确。 74．将what改为that或去掉what。75．将meet改为meeting。
书面表达
【猜题理由】我国西南地区的旱灾牵动着国人的心，在为之痛心的同时，我们也应从中吸取教训。通过这篇文章来唤起人们的节约用水 和环保意识。环保意识也是全人类共同关注的焦点。
【构思点拨】此类作文一般分三段式：第一段点明主题：旱灾给我们带来的反思(已给出);第二段分析出现旱灾的原因;第三段写作为人类，在天灾面前应如何 从自身做起。
【参考范文】
What Lessons Should Be L earned From the Drough
The drought in the south-west China has lasts for several months, which makes people face water and food scarcity. We should learn lessons from it.
The drought can be cause by several factors. Firstly, about 63 percent of cities in China are facing water scarcity. The situation is worsened by pollution and industrialization. In addition, too many trees have been cut down, so forest coverage has been decreasing rapidly. What's more, some water conservation projects haven't been functioning properly, thus people there have had to rely more heavily on rainfall for their water supply. Most of China's irrigation systems are very old.
In order to prevent this case coming about again, we should improve our awareness of saving water, making proper use of water and recycling water. Meanwhile, we ought to plant more trees and protect environment to prevent loss of water and soil erosion. Of course, the governments should increase investment and repair water conservation projects as timely as possible.
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23.1 Any visitor to this city would be almost surprised by the severe shortages and shortcomings in the elementary municipal services despite its economic growth. Schools are old, hospitals are few and understaffed. Transportation is overcrowded, and streets are narrow and filthy. Parks and playgrounds are insufficient. 任何一个到过这个城市的人都会因这个城市的最基本设施的严重不足和不良而感到震惊。尽管这个城市的经济发展很快，学校却很陈旧；医院少且医务人员不足；交通拥挤，道路狭窄而肮脏；公园及游乐场所也少得可怜。 24 Whenever you see find ... you cannot help being struck surprised astonished disappointed impressed by ... at ... 24.1 Whenever we visit a terminally ill patient, we cannot help being struck by his eagerness to know the truth about his condition. He does not only suffer from his illness, but also from the anxiety about its potential outcome. Although telling him the truth may risk destroying his hope, so that he may deteriorate faster, perhaps even commit suicide, a dying person has the right to know his condition and to make informed choice concerning his own health. 每当我们去探视一名患有不治之症的病人时，我们不禁为他那种急切想知道自己的真实病情的表情所震动。他不仅被疾病所折磨，也被为自己的病情可能发展的结果而焦虑所折磨。虽然若将真实病情告知他可能会使之失去希望从而加速病情恶化，甚至他 可能自寻短见，但一个濒临死亡的病人有权知道自己的病情，有权对自己的健康状况作出明智的判断。 24.2 Whenever we read suggestions of some recent scientific and econimic research that the curves for food demand and food supply will cross in a maximum of 60 years, and that by then, man's overpopulation, increasing pollution, and the diminishing food supply could threaten to end human life on our planet, we could not help wondering what steps man could take to ensure his survival and avoid such extinction. 近来一些科学和经济的研究表明，粮食供求平衡至多能保持用年。到那时、人口过剩、污染加剧以及粮食供应减少将会威胁人类在地球上的生存。每当我们读到这些情况，我们不禁在想：人类应当采取什么措施来确保自己的生存，避免灭绝呢？ III. 观点法 文章开门见山，直截了当提出作者对文章要讨论的问题的观点，也即文章的中心思想。以下就是常用的句型。 25 Nothing / Few things No idea / opinion belief / view / attitude is are more / as foolish dangerous untrue undesirable basic important essential 25 than as ... (which is widely commonly generally held by...). 25.1 Nothing, we have been told these years, is more educative than participating in or listening to an exchange of opinion. The seminar, the conference, the lecture, the panel discussion on the radio ------ how fine, how liberating, how instructive they are to us all, to the participants and to those at their receiving sets. They can not only acquaint one with many facts, but help deepen one's understanding of social phenomena and relationships, and broaden one's outlook. 这些年来我们都感到没有什么比参加一个讨论或听听别人的思想交流更有教育意义的了。大型讨论会，大型会议讲座以及电台直播室的讨论对我们所有人，对参加者或是听众都是那么美妙，那么有意义，有启迪作用。这些讨论不仅使我们了解了许多事实，而且有助于加深对各种社会现象和关系的理解，开阔眼界。 25.2 Few things seem to stir up more fear among today's young people than the prospect of a military draft. Feelings of patriotism are articulated much more freely now, but there seems little enthusiasm for military conscription, and no one wants to spend several years in the armed forces engaged in activities which have nothing to do with their future work. 似乎没有什么比要服兵役更使青年人担心了。现在到处洋溢着爱国主义的情感，但对服兵役却没什么热情，没有人想在部队里待几年，去从事与他未来的工作没什么关系的活动。 25.3 Perhaps no issue in this world is as basic to individual and national survival as food. But China in recent years has experienced a serious waste of food in one way or another. Especially in many big cities, this waste has become habitual and traditional, to the extent that people are seldom aware of it in their daily life. 可能在这个世界上没有什么问题比粮食对一个人乃至整个国家的生存更为重要的了。但在中国，近年来各种各样严重浪费粮食的现象比比皆是。尤其在许多大城市里，这种浪费已成为习惯性和传统性了，以致人们在日常生活中已习以为常了。 26 Never Nowhere in history the world China has the issue change idea of .... been more as visible evident popular than ... as ... 26.1 Nowhere in the world has the issue of birth control been more evident than in China. The nation is faced with such serious situation as the one in which its population is increasing much faster than the supply of food and available resources. 世界上没有一个地方比中国的计划生育问题更突出的了。这个国家正面临着十分严峻的形势，其人口增长的速度正大大超过粮食供应的速度和自然资源供应的速度。 26.2 Nowhere has the great principle of equality been so thoroughly put in practice as in China, and nowhere have such persistent efforts been made to improve the legal status of women. In spite of this, however, women in many places are still denied the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms and the right to equal opportunities for promotion. 世界上没有一个地方比中国把平等这个伟大的原则更彻底地贯彻到实践中去，没有像中国作出如此坚持不懈的努力来提高妇女的法律地位。尽管如此，在许多地方中国的妇女还是没有权利和男子在同等条件下竞争工作，没有平等的机会得到晋升。 26.3 Never in the nation's history have the stakes involving our education been higher than rim. From energy crises to air pollution, and from the improvement of the standard of living to space exploration, the approaching world of the 21st century bristles with challenges whose resolution, for better or worse, will depend largely on the quality of education. 在这个国家的历史上教育从来没有像现在这样对我们如此利害攸关。从能源危机到环境污染，从生活水平的提高到空间探索，即将到来的21世纪充满了种种挑战。要战胜那些挑战，不论怎么样，在很大程度上取决于教育的质量。 27 It is about high time we exploded shattered freed ourselves from the myth illusion fiction about ... 27.1 It's about time somebody exploded that old myth about childhood being the happiest of your life. Childhood may certainly be fairly happy, free from financial worries and the anxiety about social ladders. But have you heard our children today groaning under the ever-increasing burden of studies? Have you seen them stay up almost every night simply to finish a day's homework? 现在应该是揭穿长期来认为童年是人的一生中最幸福的时代这个古老神话的时候了。童年固然很幸福，孩子们没有经济上的忧愁，也没有争名夺利的焦虑。但是人们是否听到现在的孩子在日益沉重的学习负担下发出的呻吟声？人们是否看到孩子们为了完成一天的功课，几乎天天熬夜？
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