2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（3）及参考范文：运用复杂结构和高级词汇
(一)
(2011·全国卷)
假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：
1．说明你是该报的忠实读者
2．赞赏该报优点：
1)兼顾国内外新闻
2)介绍名人成功故事
3．提出建议：
刊登指导英语学习的文章
注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor in Chief，
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
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Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear_Editor in Chief，
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I'm a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely_yours，
Li_Hua
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(二)
(2011·湖北卷)
请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。
Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.Teamwork shows us how other people's roles fit the purpose of the group，and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数为100左右。
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参考范文
As one member of society, we always consider teamwork is essential for our success. As students, we can also learn much about teamwork from working in groups. Take one example, we once held a debate competition. And each side contained five students. We five were first debators. Before the competition, we five gathered together to make a good plan and efficient strategy. And then, each of us set out to collect information and materials for the speaking competition. Afterwards, we gathered again and checked, discussed and corrected the information. Through these steps, we did win finally. So, I really realized the importance of working in groups.
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(三)
(2011·重庆卷)
某国际动物关爱协会面向全球中学生招募“动物代言人”，希望申请者选择一种自己喜欢的动物，为之代言(speak for)假设你是重庆新华中学的学生李华，有意参与该活动。现请你用英文在线填写申请(仅需填写“申请陈述”部分)，内容如下：
●表示有意参加
●说明自己富有爱心、关爱动物
●打算为何种动物代言，并说明理由
●希望申请成功
Application Form (申请表)
Name (姓名)
Li Hua
Sex (性别)
F/M
Age(年龄)
18
Email Add. (电子邮件地址)
lihua @ xinhuaschool.com
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School in Chongqing，
China. ______
Statement of
Application
(申请陈述)
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注意：
(1)请在答题卡规定区域内作答；
(2)词数100左右；
(3)“申请陈述”的第一句已经给出，不计入总词数。
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参考范文
I_am_a_student_from_Xinhua_Middle_School_in_Chongqing,_China._I would like to be spokesman for animals to try my best to protect them.
I like animals very much and I have a loving heart for animals, especially polar bears. So I want to speak for polar bears. Nowadays, the balance of nature is being destroyed and the weather is getting warmer and warmer. What's worse, some people kill polar bears for their own sake. As a consequence, the number of polar bears is becoming smaller and smaller. So, in order to increase people's awareness of protecting polar bears, I apply for the spokesman for polar bears sincerely.
I do hope I can be chosen as a spokesman for polar bears.
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近几年的高考《考试说明》中,关于高考英语书面表达评分标准第五档(很好)中有这样一段话:"应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。"这就是说,学生仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型,不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,即使表达无语法错误,也不能得高分;相反有些错误,目的在有意识地使用复杂结构或较高级词汇,也不扣分,仍属于最高档次。高考把写作要求提到了这样一个高度,有利于反映学生的水平层次,有利于指导教学。原来"要点完整,语言无误,行文连贯,表达清楚"的标准就落后了。
在平时的教学中,训练最多的,学生们也最习惯的是五种基本句型:①主语+谓语;②主语+谓语+宾语;③主语+谓语+间接宾语;④主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语;⑤主语+谓语+宾语+补足语。用这些句型组织的句子单一、无生气,不能给人一种含金量高的审美享受。客观形势对我们提出了高难度的要求,我们怎样才能对书面表达进行科学的操作?怎样才能控制写作呢?本文拟就这一课题进行讨论,希望能给学生以启迪,调动积极性,开拓思维,培养创新精神。
首先,在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句型,要灵活运用各种语法结构,使文章有声有色。
一、改变时态
例:The bell is ringing now.(一般)
There goes the bell! (高级)
二、改变语态
例:People suggest that the conference be put off.(一般)
It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级)
三、使用不定式
例:He is so kind that he can help me.(一般)
He is so kind as to help me.(高级)
四、使用过去分词
例:①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(一般)
Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.(高级)
②Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.(一般)
Once seen, it can never be forgotten.(高级)
五、使用V-ing形式
例:①When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(一般)
On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e-mail.(高级)
②If the weather permits, I'll come tomorrow.(一般)
I'll come tomorrow, weather permitting.(高级)
六、使用名词性从句
例:①It disappointed everybody that he didn't turn up.(一般)
The fact that he didn't turn up disappointed everybody.(高级)
②I happened to have met him.(一般)
It happened that I had met him.(高级)
③To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(一般)
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(高级)
七、使用定语从句
例:The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.(一般)
The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高级)
八、使用状语从句
例:①I won't believe what he says.(一般)
No matter what he says, I won't believe.(高级)
②If you come back before six o'clock, you can go out.(一般)
You can go out on condition that(provided that) you come back before six o'clock.(高级)
③If she doesn't agree, what shall we do?(一般)
Supposing that she doesn't agree, what shall we do?(高级)
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