2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（35）及参考范文：书面表达精选
1，第四部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Mrs. Williams, my next-door neighbor, have a big house with a beautiful
garden in front of them. She is very proud of her house because of it is always
clean and tidy. While cleaned the carpets one day she suddenly saw a little mice run
across her dining room. She felt terrible ashamed, for she used to telling others that
mice were found only in dirty houses. She quickly asked her daughter Jenny help
catch the mouse. It takes them almost half an hour to catch the mouse. Afraid of
being laughed at by other people around her, Mrs. Williams wanted her daughter to
keep it the secret.
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
最近， 校车的安全引起了社会的关注。 政府在征集校车安全的条例，请你用英语写一篇短文，提出合理建议并向《英语周报》投稿。要点如下：
严期格限制乘坐人数；
定期进行安全教育；
设置专门停靠站点；
严格挑选合格司机。
注意，词数：100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
改错：1.have—has 2.them—it 3.of去掉 4.cleaned—cleaning
5. mice—mouse 6.terrible—terribly 7.telling—tell 8.加to
9.takes—took 10.the—a
书面表达：
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(2011·松江区5月)
实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你叙述倾听的重要性，并说明你的理由。
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参考范文
Being a Good Listener
As we all know, being a good listener plays an important role in making effective communication and establishing good relationship among people. The reason is that while listening attentively to others, your respect can be felt by the speaker. Besides, you understand what is being said better and the conversation will go more smoothly. If parents are willing to listen carefully to what their children are saying, generation gap is sure to be narrowed. If teachers like to listen to their students, they will find it easier to tailor their teaching to the students' needs. If the students are patient enough to listen to each other, not only will the friendship be promoted, but they can also learn from each other, thus making up for their own disadvantages.
Being a good listener is more than listening with head nodding. From my perspective, you should pay attention to the speaker's body language, for it presents the speaker's feeling and emotions. In addition, eye contact is necessary, but you remember neither to make too much nor too little, or it may cause misunderstanding.
In short, being a good listener is very important, which can never be stressed too much. Therefore, be a good listener from now on! That's all for my personal opinion.
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(2011·福建四地六校联考)
如今许多学生喜欢在学习和生活中和别人进行攀比，请以Should We Compare Ourselves with Others？为题写一篇文章。
注意：
1．文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数；
2.只能选择一个赞同或反对的观点；
3.文中不可出现考生信息，词数120。
Nowadays many students would like to compare themselves with others not only in study but also in life.
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参考范文(1)
Nowadays_many_students_would_like_to_compare_themselves_with_others_not_only_in_study__but_also_in_life._
In my opinion, comparing with other people is a good thing to us. Firstly, our society needs comparison to develop. Only when comparing ourselves with others can we know the aspects which we are weak in, then we'll make efforts to improve ourselves to a higher level. As an old saying says “Among any three people walking ，I will find something to learn for sure. Their good qualities are to be followed, and their shortcomings are to be avoided ”. Secondly , things are different from each other . Only through comparison, can we know the differences between us, and find the world is colorful. So it is advisable to compare ourselves with others. In this way, the society can be indirectly developed.
参考范文(2)
_Nowadays_many_students_would_like_to_compare_themselves_with_others_not_only_in_study_but_also_in_life._
To be frank, I don't think it is wise to compare ourselves with others. I don't deny the fact that we can benefit from it, but personally I think it does more harm than good. As our classmates have mentioned, by comparing ourselves with others, we may lose heart, get lost, and it may lead to breaking off the relationship with our friends. What's worse, it may cause the children's negative emotion, such as unhappiness, insecurity and envy. If parents pay more attention to other children instead of their children, they may neglect their children's feelings, which will lead to the children's misunderstanding and vicious circle. So in order to have a harmony society it's unwise to compare ourselves with others.
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2，第二节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to learn from your e-mail that you and your sister will come to
Xi’an and call on me on July. 1st. And I’m terribly sorry that I can’t meet you at
the airport because I have to attend meeting in Beijing. Now let me to tell you the
way to your home. When you got out of the airport, you can take Bus No.29 to
YouYi Bus Station. Walk across the Friendship Street to the west, you can see a
bookstore at the corner. Turn to the left there and go straightly on. Then you can
see a bank your left. The apartment building I live in is next to the bank. Find
Room 502, which my mother will be waiting for you .
Best regard to you all.
Yours,
Liu Mei
第三节 书面表达（满分30分）
假定你是中学生李华, 在搜狐微博上看到一位名叫Worryguy的中学生发布的博文。请你根据博文内容、写作要点和要求发布自己的观点。
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写作要点：
1. 表明自己的看法；???????????????
2. 陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；
3. 提出至少两条建议。
要求：
1. 短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。?2. 短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。
3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。? 4. 书写需清晰、工整。
Dear Worryguy,
This is really a tough problem to deal with. In my opinion,_________________
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Yours,
LiHua
短文改错：
And—But meeting 前加a 去掉to your---my
got---get Walk---Walking straightly—straight
bank后加on which---where(in which) regard--regards
作文：
Dear Worryguy,
This is really a tough problem to deal with. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents’ meeting. Instead, you’d better take a proper attitude to it.
In fact, a parents’ meeting is for the most part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students’ situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improving teaching quality.
As for your problem, it’s advisable to have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your parents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is the case) and why you failed this time or even ask them to help analyze your failure. When talking with your teachers, better ask them for the law of each subject and effective methods of learning them. Anyhow, improving your grades is the key to solving the problem.
Yours,
Li Hua
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