2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（39）及参考范文：书面表达精选
书面表达
假如你叫李明，学习成绩优异，家境贫困，无力承担你进入大学学习的费用。但你却有幸成为某慈善机构的资助对象。现在，你已被一所重点大学所录取，请你给该慈善机构的负责人王女士写一封感谢信。信的内容包括：
1．目前的生活和学习情况；
2．大学毕业后的人生方向；
3．表达感激之情。
注意：1.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．应包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
3．词数：100词左右。
Dear Ms Wang，
I'm Li Ming. Two years ago, I received your letter and schooling fees. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
[范文借鉴]
Dear Ms Wang，
I'm Li Ming. Two years ago, I received your letter and schooling fees. I'm very grateful for your kindness and generosity.
But for your help, I couldn't enjoy a wonderful college life in the beautiful campus right now. I've made a lot of friends here. Moreover, I am studying hard so as to acquire an abundant knowledge of English, which is my major. In fact, I'm making progress each day. Only in this way can I learn more and use what I've known to help those in need as well. Besides, I'm determined to go back to my hometown after graduation and devote myself to building my hometown, to make it more prosperous and beautiful.
Words seem to fail me when I try once more to express my thanks to you, and I'll keep my promise and not let you down.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
书面表达
根据下面提供的语言信息，以Life Today为题，写一篇英语短文。
1．科技的发展给人们的日常生活带来了巨大变化；
2．现代家庭拥有许多电器。以电脑为例：
(1)电脑可以帮助人们做更多的事，使人们可以在家办公；
(2)电脑可以让我们足不出户就能购物、看病、上学、读书等；
(3)电脑在现代生活中发挥着重要作用。
要求：1.词数120左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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这是一篇说明文。即介绍Life Today(以介绍电脑为主)，写作时，要简明得体，重点突出。时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。其内容必须包括以下要点：高科技带来了如今生活的巨大改变——电器尤为如此——以电脑为例——可给生活带来很大方便——发挥重要作用等。
[范文借鉴]
Life Today
With the rapid development of science and technology, there have been great changes in our daily life. We have a lot of electrical equipment at home. Take computer for example. It is said that computers will help us do more things in modern times. The majority of us people will work at home. Also we will be able to do some shopping, see a doctor or study at home instead of going out. If we want more information, the computer can do it well. In a word, computer is playing a more important part in our daily life.
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1．文章表达清晰，用词准确，特别是句型的选用得体。如：With the rapid development of science and technology, there have been great changes..., Take computer for example, It is said that...等。
2．适当使用高级词汇，如：in our daily life, in modern times, the majority of, do some shopping, instead of, in a word, playing a more important part in等。
3．过渡性词语或关联词使用合理，逻辑关系呼应，如also, in a word等，句中还用到了宾语从句以及if引导的条件状语从句等。
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6，第四部分：书面表达
第一节：完成句子（共10小题；每小题2分，满分20分）
阅读下列各小题，根据所给的汉语句子，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子。
71. By the time he was twelve years old, he __________________ a chemistry lab of his own. (set)
他十二岁时，已经建立了自己的化学实验室。
72. _______________ that China produces one third of the world’s cigarettes. (astonish)
令人震惊的是全世界三分之一的香烟是由中国生产的。
73. ____________________ should be no reason for treating one’s neighbors as strangers. （occupy）
工作繁忙不应该成为“对面不相识”的借口。
74. Rosalyn loves sports. She is proud ________________ competitions and to have broken a record by running 800 meters this year. (participate)
罗莎琳热爱运动。她为今年参加比赛并打破800米赛跑的记录而感到骄傲。
75. Not until we watched the Earth Day program on TV ______________________ much about global warming. (learn)
直到我们观看了地球日的电视节目，我们才了解了大量关于全球变暖的问题。
76. The settlement is home to nearly 1,000 people, __________________ their village homes for a better life in the city. （leave）
近千人在这一小社区居住，他们当中很多都是从农村老家来城市寻求更好的日子的。
77. He arrived in New Orleans without a penny in his pocket __________________ that there were boats for South America. （find）
他身无分文的来到新奥尔良时，却发现那里没有开往南美洲的船了。
78. __________________ of over 400km per hour, the train can complete the 30-kilometre journey in eight minutes. （travel）
以每小时400多公里的速度行驶，所以这辆火车能在8分钟之内可以完成30公里的行程。
79. When the survivor came to himself, he was eager to know _________________that saved him from the burning house. (be)
当生还者醒过来后，他急切的想知道到底是谁把他从燃烧的房子里救出来的。
80. Had he not broken the rules last week, he __________________ this week, which annoyed his mother. (fall)
要是上周他没有违反纪律，这周他就不会掉队，这让他妈妈很懊恼。
第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分）（原创）
请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Life is a series of events—both good and bad. Just when we start to get comfortable with a person, a place or a situation, something comes along to change the recipe. The truly successful person expects the unexpected, and is prepared to make adjustments.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；⑤词数为120左右。
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完成句子
71. had set up 72. It is astonishing / People are astonished / What astonishes people is
73. Being occupied with work 74. to have participated in
75. did we learn 76. many of whom left 77. only to find 78. Travelling at a / the speed
79. could have run 80. would not fall behind
短文写作评分标准
第五档
（很好，25~30分）
很好地完成了试题规定的任务； 按要求写出了内容要点； 语言结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富；语言错误极少； 有效采用不同连接手段，层次清楚； 格式和语域恰当； 完全达到与目标读者交流的目的。
第四档
（好，19~24分）
较好地完成了试题规定的任务； 包含基本内容要点，允许漏掉一到两个次要点； 使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇； 语言较为准确，只在试图表达较复杂意义时才出现个别错误； 采用了较适当的衔接手法，层次清楚； 格式与语域较恰当； 达到与目标读者交流的目的。
第三档
（适当，13~18分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务；包含多数内容要点，可能漏掉一些内容； 应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务需求； 有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解； 采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清楚； 格式与语域基本合理； 基本达到与目标读者交流的目的。
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